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March 1, 2012
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 7D
Shutter Speed
1/1600 second
Aperture
F/1.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Feb 29, 2012, 4:35:46 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
Sensor Size
2mm

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First, I'll start with what I love about this picture:

-The color contrast created by the purple flower against the green background is just lovely.

-The bokeh has me drooling over my keyboard.

-Sharp focus.

-Great sense of depth to the image.

Now I'll move on to the things that I think could be improved... and, of course, these are just my personal opinions peppered with my individual taste and influenced by my own style:

-The composition is a little weak, IMO. There's a lot of negative space in the top half of the picture, which serves to distract from the flower. In addition, the leave on the ground next to the flower distracts me from it, rather than balancing out the shot. Personally, I would have gone for a more top- or center-heavy shot, rather than left-center-heavy. Not that I have anything against left-heavy images, but putting the center of image in the middle third and shifting it slightly off-center just doesn't do it for me :P

-I understand where the center of image lies, but I'm failing to see what, exactly, the center of interest is. Is it one of the petals of the flower? The lines on the flower? The blades of grass shooting up around the flower? The stamen? The edge of one of the petals?

I can tell that it's the flower, but I'm just not sure about where, exactly, you want my eyes to travel in this image.

Other than that, nice work :) I like this picture quite a bit, and I'm headed to your gallery to check out your other work. Keep it up!
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IndigoSummerr Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
both bokeh and colors are simply amazing :love:
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Orwald Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
featured: [link] :party:
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Miss-Susan Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, that's so lovely! :heart:
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
A lovely piece. Wonderful shot.
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Orwald Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
pure beauty!
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AFineWar Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello,

I've featured this photo in my journal Wonderful World II

I hope you give it a look :hug:

Thanks.
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KlaraKay Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Very beautiful work! :heart:
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andokadesbois Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you ^^
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KlaraKay Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:peace: :heart: :hug:
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ErushiInsento Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
These colours are amazing!
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